Hi there my name is Melinda from Owairaka primary,
I really like how you said that you were proud to be second because you know that Usain Bolt is the champion. I think that you need to improve on your spelling, you need to use capital letters in your 100 word story and I think you needed to re-read your sentences to make it more interesting.
Hi there my name is Melinda from Owairaka primary,
I really like how you said that you were proud to be second because you know that Usain Bolt is the champion. I think that you need to improve on your spelling, you need to use capital letters in your 100 word story and I think you needed to re-read your sentences to make it more interesting.
Hi there my name is Melinda from Owairaka primary,
ReplyDeleteI really like how you said that you were proud to be second because you know that Usain Bolt is the champion. I think that you need to improve on your spelling, you need to use capital letters in your 100 word story and I think you needed to re-read your sentences to make it more interesting.
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Blog ya later,
Melinda
Hi there my name is Melinda from Owairaka primary,
ReplyDeleteI really like how you said that you were proud to be second because you know that Usain Bolt is the champion. I think that you need to improve on your spelling, you need to use capital letters in your 100 word story and I think you needed to re-read your sentences to make it more interesting.
Please view my blog,
odsmelindas.blogspot.co.nz
Blog ya later,
Melinda